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The Passionate Angel

          The stars glittered across the night sky as the lunar light shined down upon Jacob and Angelica. They were sitting atop the peak of Beacon Hill on the soft, cool grass. It had grown colder since they first got there a half-hour ago which is why Jacob had his jacket wrapped around Angelica in addition to his own arms. It was silent since people rarely traveled this area which gave the couple the privacy that they so desired.
          “Stop that,” said Angelica, giggling as Jacob nibbled gently on her neck. He slowly moved up her neck, kissing her neck as he rose and began nibbling gently on her ear. “I said stop,” she said again, still giggling. Jacob stopped and let his head rest beside Angelica’s, his arms still holding her tightly in his arms. There was silence for a few seconds and then Angelica turned her head to face Jacob.
          “Why did you stop,” she asked, a smile on her face.
          “Because you told me to,” he replied, also smiling.
          “I thought you said you didn’t take orders from anyone.” She poked him gently in his stomach. “That makes you a liar.”
          “That’s something we definitely don’t want. Guess I’ll have to disobey then.” He smiled again, whispering the last part.
          “I guess so,” replied Angelica just before Jacob leaned in and kissed her gently on her lips.
“I always protect you Angelica. I promise. You’re my angel. I love you.”
Angelica looked into his eyes, placed her hand on his cheek, and smiled back. “I love you too.”

          A few minutes later, a few clouds appeared overhead and began dropping a soft rain down upon the young couple. Jacob wrapped his jacket tighter around Angelica, stood up, and slicked his hair with the rain that had already gotten it wet.
          “I should start getting you home. Don’t think you’re dad will like me much if he comes back from that business trip and finds his daughter sick in bed.”
          “Probably not,” said Angelica, laughing as she stood up. They kissed one more time and held hands as they started heading down the hill. Angelica lived only a few blocks away from the hill so the two of them had decided to walk instead of taking Jacobs car. Nobody was out wandering the streets this late expect for Jacob and Angelica, or so they thought. Halfway to Angelica’s house, a guy stepped out of an alley in front of them. When they tried to move to one side to get past, he stepped in front of them again.
          “Damn, she looks like a hot fuck,” said the man as he licked his lips.
          “What did you just say,” asked Jacob, a slight growl in his voice.
          “I said she looks like a hot fuck,” said the man again, a little louder as he pulled out a knife. “And I wouldn’t mind having a piece of that ass.”
          “Jacob,” said Angelica softly.
          “Get behind me,” said Jacob as he put himself between her and the man. “If you don’t leave us alone right now, I’m going to kick your ass.”
          “You’ll kick my ass,” laughed the man. “I tell you what, if you had her over along with all your money, we’ll let you watch while we fuck her. I’d say that’s a good deal, don’t you boys?”
          Before Jacob had a chance to respond, two more voices behind him and Angelica chimed in agreement followed shortly after by laughter. Jacob turned his body, the guy with the knife to his right and the two additional guys to his left while he kept Angelica behind him.
          “What do you say buddy? What to see your girl get fucked by three guys at one time?”
          “Jacob,” said Angelica again, tears in her eyes as she held onto him.
          “Angelica,” whispered Jacob as he kept turning to look at the guys on either side, “when I tell you to, run home as fast as you can. I’ll meet up with you there. Whatever you do, don’t come back.”
          “Don’t come back! You hear me?” Angelica nodded, the rain mixing with her own tears causing streams to now run down her face. They guys inched closer and Jacob kept looking back and forth, trying to make sure that they didn’t go ahead and rush them all at once.
          “NOW!” Jacob rushed towards the guy with the knife with Angelica at his side. He punched him square in the face, sending him backwards onto the ground. Angelica jumped over him and started running home as fast as she could without so much as looking back.
          “Son of a-” The man was quickly silenced when Jacobs fist collided with his jaw. The other two rushed over to help out their leader as Jacob picked up the knife and started fighting with it. Within minutes, the wet ground was spotted with puddles of blood.
This is actually based on a true story believe it or not. >_>
I had just gotten done with writing another chapter for a book I'm working on and I wanted to write more...but not for the book.

I was going to finish Meadow of Passion, the EdwardxBella story but it wasn't on my laptop and I didn't feel like transferring it from my storage unit. So, instead, I decided to write this one. It's one that I've been thinking about doing for a while but never had the I do ^_^.

Hope you like. There will be three parts to it so make sure to read all of it to enjoy the grand quality of it all :P.

Part 1 - [link]
Part 2 –[link]
Part 3 - [link]

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ownpersonalhell Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2008  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
really good ....' goes to read part 2 '
ScarsInsideHeaven Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Awww. Curse those guys! Go Jacob Go!!

Lol, good part one >> Off to part two
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