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Breath Again, Poem 10 by *Aaron-Leon:iconAaron-Leon:



Breath Again

I didn’t mean to hurt you my love,
to damage your fragile heart,
but that one confession of my only transgression,
tore you completely apart.

You locked yourself inside that room,
mixing all the drugs inside the cabinet.
I know that your actions were on purpose,
although they claim it was an accident.

You took them all immediately,
attempting to end your life.
You would have been successful too,
if no one had noticed you weren’t all right.

They knocked on the door and you cried more,
wanting your family to go away.
They broke down the door, saw you on the floor,
and you were on your way.

Now I’m here, at your bedside,
in this dreary hospital.
You're now strapped to a breathing machine,
because, on your own, you’re not able.

I promise to heal your wounds and make you whole.
I promise to be here until the very end.
Please my love, just do one thing.
Please just breath again.
©2008-2009 *Aaron-Leon
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Author's Comments

This is Poem #10 for 100 Themes, Variation one.

Theme #10 is Breath Again


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:iconbwitchd3:
That gave me goosebumps.

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"You gotta fight for everything that's worth anything."
~ Me
:iconaaron-leon:
Is that a good thing or a bad thing o.0?

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Thary:"How many people have you hurt that badly?"
Me:"Do you count the breaths you take?"
___
Jahi:"We're so going to hell for this."
Me:"You are. I'll just get kicked out again for almost taking over."
___
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:iconbwitchd3:
A good thing.

--
"You gotta fight for everything that's worth anything."
~ Me
:iconeareph:
its good. I like the idea.

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"If every rule has an exception, then there must be an exception to the rule that every rule has an exception."
*Writers-Club
:iconaaron-leon:
Thanks ^_^

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Thary:"How many people have you hurt that badly?"
Me:"Do you count the breaths you take?"
___
Jahi:"We're so going to hell for this."
Me:"You are. I'll just get kicked out again for almost taking over."
___
Proud to be part of*100ThemesChallenge

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